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*****

Via Verde

That鈥onely little froggie there

Fixed his tie and combed his hair

Put on a hat and then ran down the stairs

He鈥檚 gotta鈥?date with lady frog

They鈥檒l watch the moon from rotted logs

Strolling hand in hand along the bog

You鈥檝e never seen a greener pair

Our froggie and his girlie fair

In reptilian love uncompared

*****

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Fun, and I have a suggestion. Forgive this. have ya ever heard the expression, "Fine as Frog "HAIR"?

It's FRYday, but I prefer the legs marinated, sauted, and served with a delicate cheese sauce on the side. Kinda the upscale version of Dipping Hot Wings.

Steven Wolf

OOPS ya did say HIS hair. maybe His "Flair"???

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Yes it rox!!!!!

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i like itt

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Kinda silly, but it put a smile on my face. :D

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It's okay :/

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yes

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I loved it all................

except the last line

) =

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I LOVE IT!! I It ryhmes and its cute!

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LOVE IT!

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Wow, thats beutiful

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Awww, definatly adorable :]

Keep writting!

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sure

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awwwwwww cute.

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Great job!

Love it!

This is one awesome poem =D

keep it up!!! =]

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it has lots of potential

what does it symbolize?

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its cute! u should get someone to draw pictures and send it to a childrens book! good job

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cooooooool

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Very good! You should publish it =D

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awww that's so cute!!!!

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aww verry cute!!

well written!

gave me a smile!

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cute and funny, i honestly really like it, good job

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Very nice. But it could have more ryming in the begining but other wise....WELL DONE!

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its ok but frogs are amphibians not reptiles

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I love your poems!

You could fill tomes

with so much delight.

Start on it tonight!

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ABSOLUTELY

BUT WHEN DOES A PRINCESS PICK UP THE FROG

SO HE CAN CHANGE INTO A :PRINCE

NEXT POEM . THE CHAMELEON FROG PRINCE

GOOD LUCK

SERIOUSLY .. REALLY CUTE

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Edit stanza 2 line 3 and lose one syllable. Maybe strolling together alond the bod or something. it just doesn't flow well.

SO CUTE!

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Awww, that is SO sweet. I thank you, and Kermit thanks you.

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LOL I love it. It's simple and cute but still manages to give an image left up to the imagination.

I'd love if you expanded on it a bit.

I agree that the last line needs some help :D but other than that, it's really cute and could be a nice children's poem.

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In reptilian love green hearts laid bare.

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"Froggy went a courtin' and he did ride mm hm"

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I'm still laughing....wait a sec....wasn't ready for that one.....via verde....and, leave em laughin when you leave...come back...CSI time!

Really, that's cute...last line(hehehehehe) and all....